Need some feedback on my wedding site

Old Jan 8, 2008 | 10:22 PM
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Need some feedback on my wedding site

What do you guys think?

www.josipa-and-daniel.com
Old Jan 8, 2008 | 10:25 PM
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I like it. Clean. Green is a bit too bright, especially when transitioning into a site with a white BG such as i-club.

*waves to Lydia*
Old Jan 8, 2008 | 10:28 PM
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My site is better, but your still looks good.
Old Jan 8, 2008 | 10:36 PM
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lookin good daniel, congrats and I wish you the absolute best...
Old Jan 8, 2008 | 10:42 PM
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looks good, but i'd use a gradient green instead of solid blah blah i know.

More pics of bridesmaids!
Old Jan 8, 2008 | 10:51 PM
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love it! nice colors and text, goodjob.
Old Jan 8, 2008 | 10:52 PM
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front page graphic has too much "headroom" behind the 2 of you...

a bigger image of you 2 would do better...
Old Jan 8, 2008 | 11:59 PM
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Thanks guys!
Old Jan 9, 2008 | 12:01 AM
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I think that the headline "Josipa & Daniel" should be a quicker read. The design below the header overtakes the header. The date also should be a quick read too, but not as much as your names which are the top priority (you guys), you can do this by slightly moving it and enlarging it, giving the eye more space around it (quicker read). That way immediately you know "who" and "when", and you flash that into peoples heads (especially the date). You can solve this by significantly increasing the font sizes of the header, and taking out the lighter part of the gradient at the top, as it gives it the least contrast. I have to say I don't mind the color , but I do think that it can be slightly darker in value (would give a better contrast), so that the text can be easier to read. Then I would line up the top of the pic, your welcome message and the menu. Last I took down the value of the design at the top and added a little hue to it to not only blend it more into the background , but also so that it doesn't compete with the header/your names. Overall , I think it has a very simple clean, clear layout, these are just some small tweaks to give it just a tad more umph. Just my take on it!

Here's a quick chop of what I mean:
Old Jan 9, 2008 | 12:04 AM
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looks clean brucey
Old Jan 9, 2008 | 12:10 AM
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I'm SO crashing your reception.

Looks good, the green was a bit much coming from i-club, but other than that, I think adizon gave good advice.
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