SRIC Pride & various other derails
02-01-2005, 10:35 AM
#218
Registered User
Thread Starter
iTrader: (14)
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: Peoples Republik of Kalifornia
Posts: 14,221
Car Info: 05 H2 SUT, 45 GPW, 10 Murano, 13 Boss 302
Can you post one with the SRIC logo off of the car (maybe on the ground silohette)? Then some more detail on the grill and hood scoop. The car just looks funny with the logo all over it (it could just be my crappy depth perception).
On the pace notes, could you move the handwritten notes (which I like) to the right or at least farther away from the SRIC. The second and third ones take away from the SRIC standing out on it's own.
I second the idea of putting the stars between Sac & Reno, although I don't know if the detail will show up.
C note: Dorifto!
On the pace notes, could you move the handwritten notes (which I like) to the right or at least farther away from the SRIC. The second and third ones take away from the SRIC standing out on it's own.
I second the idea of putting the stars between Sac & Reno, although I don't know if the detail will show up.
C note: Dorifto!
02-01-2005, 10:36 AM
#220
VIP Member
iTrader: (1)
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Reno, NV
Posts: 842
Car Info: '94 SVX, '02 WRX
Originally Posted by STi deede
...I guess. Why does there need to be anything between them?
Think of it this way: "Sacramento" and "Reno" are describing the type of "Impreza Club". If there's no slash or an "&", then the order becomes unclear... is this a Reno Impreza Club, that's of the Sacramento variety? We want to convey that the club is as much a "Sacramento Impreza Club" as it is a "Reno Impreza Club"... and I think the slash does that.
At least that's what I thought when I was making it. "Sacramento Reno Impreza Club" needs something... a slash, a dash, an ampersand... something... and I think the slash is the least distracting, and most accurate.
02-01-2005, 10:38 AM
#221
Registered User
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: Lovely Reno, NV
Posts: 3,391
Car Info: 2004 Sti
Originally Posted by sperry
Asthetically, I see what you're saying... but gramatically, I don't know what a "Sacramento Reno" is.
Think of it this way: "Sacramento" and "Reno" are describing the type of "Impreza Club". If there's no slash or an "&", then the order becomes unclear... is this a Reno Impreza Club, that's of the Sacramento variety? We want to convey that the club is as much a "Sacramento Impreza Club" as it is a "Reno Impreza Club"... and I think the slash does that.
At least that's what I thought when I was making it. "Sacramento Reno Impreza Club" needs something... a slash, a dash, an ampersand... something... and I think the slash is the least distracting, and most accurate.
Think of it this way: "Sacramento" and "Reno" are describing the type of "Impreza Club". If there's no slash or an "&", then the order becomes unclear... is this a Reno Impreza Club, that's of the Sacramento variety? We want to convey that the club is as much a "Sacramento Impreza Club" as it is a "Reno Impreza Club"... and I think the slash does that.
At least that's what I thought when I was making it. "Sacramento Reno Impreza Club" needs something... a slash, a dash, an ampersand... something... and I think the slash is the least distracting, and most accurate.
Agreed...
02-01-2005, 10:40 AM
#222
VIP Member
iTrader: (7)
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Funtown
Posts: 25,095
Car Info: A limousine with a chauffer
Originally Posted by sperry
Asthetically, I see what you're saying... but gramatically, I don't know what a "Sacramento Reno" is.
Think of it this way: "Sacramento" and "Reno" are describing the type of "Impreza Club". If there's no slash or an "&", then the order becomes unclear... is this a Reno Impreza Club, that's of the Sacramento variety? We want to convey that the club is as much a "Sacramento Impreza Club" as it is a "Reno Impreza Club"... and I think the slash does that.
At least that's what I thought when I was making it. "Sacramento Reno Impreza Club" needs something... a slash, a dash, an ampersand... something... and I think the slash is the least distracting, and most accurate.
Think of it this way: "Sacramento" and "Reno" are describing the type of "Impreza Club". If there's no slash or an "&", then the order becomes unclear... is this a Reno Impreza Club, that's of the Sacramento variety? We want to convey that the club is as much a "Sacramento Impreza Club" as it is a "Reno Impreza Club"... and I think the slash does that.
At least that's what I thought when I was making it. "Sacramento Reno Impreza Club" needs something... a slash, a dash, an ampersand... something... and I think the slash is the least distracting, and most accurate.
P.S. You rock.
02-01-2005, 10:40 AM
#223
VIP Member
iTrader: (1)
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: Reno, NV
Posts: 842
Car Info: '94 SVX, '02 WRX
Originally Posted by Egan
Can you post one with the SRIC logo off of the car (maybe on the ground silohette)? Then some more detail on the grill and hood scoop. The car just looks funny with the logo all over it (it could just be my crappy depth perception).
On the pace notes, could you move the handwritten notes (which I like) to the right or at least farther away from the SRIC. The second and third ones take away from the SRIC standing out on it's own.
I second the idea of putting the stars between Sac & Reno, although I don't know if the detail will show up.
C note: Dorifto!
On the pace notes, could you move the handwritten notes (which I like) to the right or at least farther away from the SRIC. The second and third ones take away from the SRIC standing out on it's own.
I second the idea of putting the stars between Sac & Reno, although I don't know if the detail will show up.
C note: Dorifto!
).I originally had the handwritten notes all on the right, but I thought they looked a bit "fake", and not so handwritten... however, you make a very good point about making sure the "SRIC" stands out. I'll try to figure something out.
And "Dorifto" is *perfect*!! lol
02-01-2005, 10:44 AM
#224
Registered User
Thread Starter
iTrader: (14)
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: Peoples Republik of Kalifornia
Posts: 14,221
Car Info: 05 H2 SUT, 45 GPW, 10 Murano, 13 Boss 302
Originally Posted by sperry
I started a version of the car w/ more detail... it's really distracting... I couldn't find a happy medium between keeping the simplicity of the silhouette and having to do a full-blown drawing of the car. Basically, it's one or the other, and I think the silhouette works better (plus drawing that car so it looks good will take like 5 hours ).
I originally had the handwritten notes all on the right, but I thought they looked a bit "fake", and not so handwritten... however, you make a very good point about making sure the "SRIC" stands out. I'll try to figure something out.
And "Dorifto" is *perfect*!! lol
).I originally had the handwritten notes all on the right, but I thought they looked a bit "fake", and not so handwritten... however, you make a very good point about making sure the "SRIC" stands out. I'll try to figure something out.
And "Dorifto" is *perfect*!! lol
Time for another visit to the eye doctor (oh yeah, my health insurance kicks in today!!!)
02-01-2005, 10:50 AM
#225
Registered User
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: en route
Posts: 3,578
Car Info: puppy hauler
Originally Posted by sperry
Asthetically, I see what you're saying... but gramatically, I don't know what a "Sacramento Reno" is.
Think of it this way: "Sacramento" and "Reno" are describing the type of "Impreza Club". If there's no slash or an "&", then the order becomes unclear... is this a Reno Impreza Club, that's of the Sacramento variety? We want to convey that the club is as much a "Sacramento Impreza Club" as it is a "Reno Impreza Club"... and I think the slash does that.
At least that's what I thought when I was making it. "Sacramento Reno Impreza Club" needs something... a slash, a dash, an ampersand... something... and I think the slash is the least distracting, and most accurate.
Think of it this way: "Sacramento" and "Reno" are describing the type of "Impreza Club". If there's no slash or an "&", then the order becomes unclear... is this a Reno Impreza Club, that's of the Sacramento variety? We want to convey that the club is as much a "Sacramento Impreza Club" as it is a "Reno Impreza Club"... and I think the slash does that.
At least that's what I thought when I was making it. "Sacramento Reno Impreza Club" needs something... a slash, a dash, an ampersand... something... and I think the slash is the least distracting, and most accurate.
You are right, of the choices available, it works the best.
I will settle.
Everything else is perfect, great job. I can't wait to get my shirts.